A very good start!

With other comments, maybe you can improve the coloured or underlined sections. When this done, I shall publish your collective work as an article... and you will be able to print it.

(Bravo à ... presque tous. Un très bon début.

Vous vous souvenez? Le blog est fait pour partager et échanger... Une autre série de commentaires va permettre d'aller plus loin dans la qualité de vos textes. Je pourrai alors publier en article ce travail collectif, et vous pourrez l'imprimer")

-  Un problème méthodologique... pour tous: vous oubliez de vous servir de vos outils: cahier, livre...  où vous avez de l'aide !

- Un excellent point! : vous savez, pratiquement tous, déjà, vous servir du dictionnaire en ligne.

Keep at it!

"She is very nice, she's got long brown hair , blue eyes.She's got a glasses green.She is fourteen years.She has got two dogs and one fish.She 's got a brother who is nine.He's name is Patrick.

That _ all!"

"my best friend is Jennifer, she is tall, light brown.Her eyes are brown.Jennifer have a diammant in these teeth. (Merryprof's help: is et light brown ne vont pas ensemble)

"hello _ my best friends is arthur. he has got blond hair and blue eyes.he is very nice.he has got a dog who is 3 ."

"my best friend is nanou _ she is 15. she has got long brown hairs and green eyes. she was born on 12 of april 1990  _  she is crazy but very nice! she is very beautiful! "

"My friend is name is Sophie, she's got a auburn hair and brown eyes. She is in 3°7 " (Merryprof's help:  She is in fourth year: 3è7)