A good start !

Thank you to  max -ben, max -ben, lili, chanez et pauline, marinoo, chacha and Jojo, lulu, Florine & Camille

Try and  improve the passages coloured in yellow : (essayez d'améliorer les passages en jaune!)

He is tall and strong  ponctuation??  his name is Benjamin, he live next to my  house. He have a three cat .

He is small ponctuation??  he is nice ponctuation??  he have got brown hairs and he have got brown eyes ponctuation??  he likes football and hand-ball.

My best friend is lucie. She's 14. She's verry nice and tall. She likes Maths and Espagnol , but she hates french.

my best friend is Amélie. she is very nice.

... not too tired, are you?!

my best friend is maud. she is very slim ... and very happy.

her name (... de qui parles- tu?) is madeleine ponctuation??  she is 99.She have got 7 brothers and 6 sisters. she live in tataouine (essaie quelque chose de rigolo... à l’anglaise!!!) . she is very nice and pretty. her husband is 21. her birthday is today!!!
happy birthday, grandmother!!!!!! Granma! (Ou Grannie!)

My best friend is alison. She's very nice.

  Hope you are not too tired!

Hello, My best friend is Gaëlle. She has got short brown hair and big brown eyes. She is slim and tall. (tall and slim)

They (de qui parlez- vous?) are 13 years old and ??????  brown hair ???? brown eyes ponctuation??     ???? is maeva and tatoune. De quoi parlez- vous??? 

Bon courage...    Avec l'aide de tous, tout ceci peut bien s'améliorer!