A very good start!

With other comments, maybe you can improve the coloured or underlined sections. When this done, I shall publish your collective work as an article... and you will be able to print it.

(Bravo à ... presque tous. Un très bon début.

Vous vous souvenez? Le blog est fait pour partager et échanger... Une autre série de commentaires va permettre d'aller plus loin dans la qualité de vos textes. Je pourrai alors publier en article ce travail collectif, et vous pourrez l'imprimer")

-  Un problème méthodologique... pour tous: vous oubliez de vous servir de vos outils: cahier, livre...  où vous avez de l'aide !

- Un excellent point! : vous savez, pratiquement tous, déjà, vous servir du dictionnaire en ligne.

Keep at it!

"She is very nice, she's got long brown hair , blue eyes.She's got a glasses green.She is fourteen years.She has got two dogs and one fish.She 's got a brother who is nine.He's name is Patrick.

That _ all!"

"my best friend is Jennifer, she is tall, light brown.Her eyes are brown.Jennifer have a diammant in these teeth. (Merryprof's help: is et light brown ne vont pas ensemble)

"hello _ my best friends is arthur. he has got blond hair and blue eyes.he is very nice.he has got a dog who is 3 ."

"my best friend is nanou _ she is 15. she has got long brown hairs and green eyes. she was born on 12 of april 1990  _  she is crazy but very nice! she is very beautiful! "

"My friend is name is Sophie, she's got a auburn hair and brown eyes. She is in 3°7 " (Merryprof's help:  She is in fourth year: 3è7)

A good start !

Thank you to  max -ben, max -ben, lili, chanez et pauline, marinoo, chacha and Jojo, lulu, Florine & Camille

Try and  improve the passages coloured in yellow : (essayez d'améliorer les passages en jaune!)

He is tall and strong  ponctuation??  his name is Benjamin, he live next to my  house. He have a three cat .

He is small ponctuation??  he is nice ponctuation??  he have got brown hairs and he have got brown eyes ponctuation??  he likes football and hand-ball.

My best friend is lucie. She's 14. She's verry nice and tall. She likes Maths and Espagnol , but she hates french.

my best friend is Amélie. she is very nice.

... not too tired, are you?!

my best friend is maud. she is very slim ... and very happy.

her name (... de qui parles- tu?) is madeleine ponctuation??  she is 99.She have got 7 brothers and 6 sisters. she live in tataouine (essaie quelque chose de rigolo... à l’anglaise!!!) . she is very nice and pretty. her husband is 21. her birthday is today!!!
happy birthday, grandmother!!!!!! Granma! (Ou Grannie!)

My best friend is alison. She's very nice.

  Hope you are not too tired!

Hello, My best friend is Gaëlle. She has got short brown hair and big brown eyes. She is slim and tall. (tall and slim)

They (de qui parlez- vous?) are 13 years old and ??????  brown hair ???? brown eyes ponctuation??     ???? is maeva and tatoune. De quoi parlez- vous??? 

Bon courage...    Avec l'aide de tous, tout ceci peut bien s'améliorer!